英语作文改错.日记I am very upset .I admit that I told a lie to you.But why don't you say tactful to me .Maybe I was a bad kid.But you are my mother.You should help me rather than makeing me get injured
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我帮你重新写个吧.这个表达不太好.
I'm very upset because of your attitudes towards me.I admit that I lied to you,I just hope you can care for me more and say I am a very smart kid.Maybe I am not a good boy,but you're my mother,please help me instead of injuring me..
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I'm very upset. I admit that I lie to you. But why can't you gently said to me? Maybe I am a bad boy, but you are my mother. You should help me and not let I hurt.
帮你改了些地方，与你原来的语法不同，但是意思是一样的。不懂还可以来请教我。
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makeing改为make.
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I'm sorry. I admit that I lie to you. But why don't you give I said politely. Maybe I'm a bad kid. But you are my mother. You should help me instead of trouble I was injured