假设你是李华,正在伦敦的一条街上购物,突然有两个年轻人匆匆走过,引起了你的注意,你就向不远处的一位警察反映,正好他在寻找两名小偷,他请你书面描述一下那两位年轻人的特征,你所看到的基

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假设你是李华,正在伦敦的一条街上购物,突然有两个年轻人匆匆走过,引起了你的注意,你就向不远处的一位警察反映,正好他在寻找两名小偷,他请你书面描述一下那两位年轻人的特征,你所看到的基本情况如下:
 
年轻人之一
年轻人之二
身高
约1.90米
约1.65米
长相
高鼻子,大嘴巴,秃头
小鼻子,小眼睛,卷头发
衣着
蓝上衣,旧皮鞋
黑色的裤子,运动鞋
神色
匆匆忙忙,四处张望,每人手上都拿着一个塑料袋。
逃离方向
沿着这条街,在红灯处左拐弯。
写作要求:
1. 书面描述必须包括以上全部内容;
2. 使用5个句子。
参考词汇:秃头 bald head ,卷头发 curly hairOne is about 1.90 metres tall, and the other is only about 1.65 metres, quite short. The taller has a big nose, a big mouth and a bald head, whilst the shorter one has a small nose, small eyes and curly hair. The taller is wearing a blue jacket, a pair of old shoes, and the shorter is wearing black trousers with sports shoes. Each of them took a plastic bag in their hands while going in a hurry and looked around sometimes. They ran away down his street and turned left at the red light. 

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(答案→)One is about 1.90 metres tall, and the other is only about 1.65 metres, quite short. The taller has a big nose, a big mouth and a bald head, whilst the shorter one has a small nose, small eyes and curly hair. The taller is wearing a blue jacket, a pair of old shoes, and the shorter is wearing black trousers with sports shoes. Each of them took a plastic bag in their hands while going in a hurry and looked around sometimes. They ran away down his street and turned left at the red light. 
解析:
文体
记叙文,用第三人称,侧重描写这两个人的外表特征。
信息组织
信息组织可以有两条线索,一是分别逐项对比,二是先描述一个,再描述另一个。选择第一种比较容易辨别。
①身高对比;②长相对比;③衣着对比;④神色;⑤方向
时态
一般现在时,现在进行时,一般过去时,现在完成时
 
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