文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划

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文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out  of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew
make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me
making                                  actors
at that time, but I
and/so
rushed back home to get∧. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, theyhave finished the scene and
it                                           had
the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave
anywhere               disappointed                     
while he walked
 when                                          
out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I
had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
have 

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(答案→)Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew
make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me
making                                  actors
at that time, but I
and/so
rushed back home to get∧. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, theyhave finished the scene and
it                                           had
the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave
anywhere               disappointed                     
while he walked
 when                                          
out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I
had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
have 
解析:
1,不能使用make,前面出现了came across,一个句子出现了两个谓语而且没有连词,所以是错误的,用分词making做状语
2.one of ...后面显然是用名词复数,所以用actors
3.But表示转折,译为但是,根据前面来说是表示继承顾用and/so
4.根据got back,后面应该用过去式,所以不是have,是had
5.第五个错误在everywhere,前面有could’t,所以用anywhere
6.Disappointing是用来表示事物本身的性质,这里的主语是I,所以用disappointed
7.这里的意思是我很失望然后准备离开时,这时他走出了这栋房子,这里用when很而不用while,两个动作不是同一人发生的,不能用while表示同时
8.主语前面有did,所以后面用原形have
9.rushed back home to get...get后面缺少名词,因添加it补充完整
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