请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to any

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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t e to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap(收获).”
注意:1. 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示;
2. 除诗歌外,文体不限;
3 .文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数为120左右。Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.” 

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(答案→)Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.” 
解析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语: have a desire for 渴望,belong to属于,make every effort to do努力做…,make the best of 充分利用,catch up with赶上, pay off成功,有回报,还有范文中的句式也很出彩:As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”这句话用了非限制性定语从句,So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything.这句话用了倒装句,I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. 这句话用了宾语从句, Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. 这句话也用了倒装句,. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.这句话用了让步状语从句。
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