please help me check my languange and correct it.t

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please help me check my languange and correct it.thank you!after many round of discussion, we finally e to a decision to make a social awareness advertisement about non smoking issues during the pr

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After many rounds discussion,finally,we decite to make a social awareness advertisement on non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we get the idea from a cigaratte advertisement on a magazine.there is a warning at bottom :expectant mother smoking during prenancy will make the baby birth weight smallerand being born premature .
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多轮讨论之后,我们最终决定制作一则关于在怀孕期间禁烟问题的公益广告。这个想法是我不经意间在某杂志上看到一则香烟广告后冒出来的,那则广告下方有如下警示:孕妇在怀孕期间吸烟会导致早产及出生婴儿体重较轻。突然间,我想到用这个概念来做我的广告以提醒孕妇。
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