请根据以下提示,并结合生活学习实际,用英语写一篇短文。There is a crack (裂痕)in everything, so is our life, that’s how

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请根据以下提示,并结合生活学习实际,用英语写一篇短文。
There is a crack (裂痕)in everything, so is our life, that’s how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, Canadian singer). We all possibly make a mistake, but what matters most is how to make use of the mistake to get improved.
注意:1.无需写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4.字数为120词左右。Sample: 

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(答案→)Sample: 
解析:本题是一篇材料作文,材料以英文的形式给出,学生首先需要看懂所给材料,根据材料的意思进行构思。材料大意是“每个人都会犯错,重要的是,如何利用错误来提高自己”。注意作文不能抄写所给材料,不能写成诗歌。
【亮点说明】范文叙述了自己打破花瓶这件事,作者勇敢承认了自己的错误,并从中得到教训--诚信做人,这给作者带来了荣誉。
范文使用了短语tell the truth, told lies, From then on等;范文使用了较多的语法知识,如结果状语从句so fearful that;时间状语从句When he came back;定语从句when I was left alone at home和which was much treasured by my father及which benefited my growth a lot;宾语从句admitted to my father that it was my fault和...is reminding me that I have a long way to go;固定句型forced me to mind my behavior;强调句型It is...that等,能够熟练运用语法知识,给作文增色不少。
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