昨天，你在街上目睹了一起事故：一位老人在等车，汽车来后由于车上人多，老人没有上去，而手中的伞和书包被车门夹住，老人被拖倒在地，引起事故。警察向你作现场事故调查，询问事故过程和你对事故责任的看法。请根据下图和提示用英语写出你的回答。
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2. 第一句话已经给出；
3. 词数：100左右。
When the accident happened I was standing near the bus stop. When the accident happened I was standing near the bus stop. I saw the old lady waiting for the bus there with her umbrella and a bag. The bus arrived soon. After some passengers got off the bus, she tried to get on, but it was full. The driver closed the doors without looking carefully at them, and drove away. Unfortunately the old lady’s umbrella and the bag were caught in the door and the bus pulled her along the road. She shouted to the driver and fell to the ground. Then the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I think the driver was to blame. He should have been more careful.
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(答案→)When the accident happened I was standing near the bus stop. I saw the old lady waiting for the bus there with her umbrella and a bag. The bus arrived soon. After some passengers got off the bus, she tried to get on, but it was full. The driver closed the doors without looking carefully at them, and drove away. Unfortunately the old lady’s umbrella and the bag were caught in the door and the bus pulled her along the road. She shouted to the driver and fell to the ground. Then the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I think the driver was to blame. He should have been more careful.
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