“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the

发布时间:2020-08-17 07:36:38

“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the Gaokao, from 150 points to 100 points by 2016.”
请依据上面这则新闻,结合实际,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你对英语学习的认识,并简单陈述你的理由。
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为120左右。
    
    
    There is some news that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination, but I don’t think it has any effect on our English learning. English is still playing an important part in our daily life. 

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(答案→)There is some news that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination, but I don’t think it has any effect on our English learning. English is still playing an important part in our daily life. 
解析:本文是一篇材料作文,开放性作文。所给材料虽然新颖,但是所谈的话题考生却非常熟悉,写起来有话可说。写好本篇作文的难点有两个:一是怎么用简短的话吧“这则新闻”的内容说清楚;二是就“这则新闻”的内容就“自己认识方面”谈谈理由。至于“谈谈你对英语学习的认识”则相对要容易得多。另外文章用典型的三段式,要注意段与段之间的顺利过渡。
【亮点说明】范文采用典型的三段式:揭示话题、谈对英语学习的认识和陈述理由。范文第一段用两句话就揭示了话题,并恰到好处地过渡到下一段。第一句话句子非常长,多达30字,充分显示了作者驾驭句子的高超能力。这是一个并列复合句:“but”连接的并列句和两个名词性从句(同位语从句:that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination和宾语从句:it has any effect on our English learning.)。第二句话是个简单句与第二段内容进行无缝对接。第二段过渡词句(Besides,what’s more等)的运用和各种各样短语(With the development of, more and more, are faced with, takes a more important part ,with a good mand of ,be better prepared for等)的运用为文章增色不少。第三段用三句话简洁明了谈了自己的理由。并用一句话“In my opinion, the national enthusiasm for English will keep on.”来总结升华本篇文章的主题,为这篇文章做出了圆满的收尾。
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