上周我们就“中学是否应该要求学生穿校服”在全校老师和同学中分别进行了一次讨论。讨论的基本情况是:大多数老师认为中学生应该穿校服,大多数学生却持反对意见。请根据一下要求写一个简短的情

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上周我们就“中学是否应该要求学生穿校服”在全校老师和同学中分别进行了一次讨论。讨论的基本情况是:大多数老师认为中学生应该穿校服,大多数学生却持反对意见。请根据一下要求写一个简短的情况介绍。、
【写作内容】
讨论的时间和话题;
老师和学生在态度上的差异;
老师:有助于培养集体精神、平等意识,还能减少家长花费。
学生:校服质量差,不舒适,更不利于展示个性(individuality)。
你自己的观点及理由。
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容;
文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
句子结构正确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。Last week we had a discussion among the teachers and the students of our school as to whether schools should require their students to wear uniforms. It is demonstrated that most teachers are for the idea while the majority of students are against it. The teachers believe that wearing uniforms helps develop team spirit, a sense of equality, and reduce the cost of parents. The students stand in opposition not only because school uniforms are of low quality and thus unfortable, but also because school uniforms lack variety and thus do not help exhibit individuality. I like wearing my school uniform because it is a symbol of my school which I am proud of. 

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(答案→)Last week we had a discussion among the teachers and the students of our school as to whether schools should require their students to wear uniforms. It is demonstrated that most teachers are for the idea while the majority of students are against it. The teachers believe that wearing uniforms helps develop team spirit, a sense of equality, and reduce the cost of parents. The students stand in opposition not only because school uniforms are of low quality and thus unfortable, but also because school uniforms lack variety and thus do not help exhibit individuality. I like wearing my school uniform because it is a symbol of my school which I am proud of. 
解析:本篇写作题材是“中学是否应该要求学生穿校服”的两种不同观点。要点包含:老师的观点,学生的观点和自己的观点,要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化;2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断,要有辩证的思维。考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式,按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文,因为只能用5个句子表达全部内容,所以尽量使用长的句子,还要使句型多样化。适当使用连词,使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】文章多是复杂句为主:Last week we had a discussion among the teachers and the students of our school as to whether schools should require their students to wear uniforms. 这句话用了宾语从句,It is demonstrated that most teachers are for the idea while the majority of students are against it. 这句话用了it做形式主语,The teachers believe that wearing uniforms helps develop team spirit, a sense of equality, and reduce the cost of parents.这句话用了动名词做主语, The students stand in opposition not only because school uniforms are of low quality and thus unfortable, but also because school uniforms lack variety and thus do not help exhibit individuality. 这句话用了not only…but also…,结构,I like wearing my school uniform because it is a symbol of my school which I am proud of. 这句话用了it做形式主语和定语从句。
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