母亲节快到了。请你用英语写一篇介绍你母亲的简短文章。
【写作内容】
囗 教龄近20年的小学音乐教师；
囗 二十二岁大学毕业选择当了老师；
囗 工作努力，待学生态度和蔼，以身作则；
囗 深受学生尊敬爱戴；
囗 乐于帮助有困难的学生；
囗 我为母亲自豪。
【写作要求】
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。My mother has been a music teacher in a primary school for nearly 20 years. She finished college at the age of 22 and chose to work as a teacher. She is well respected and deeply loved by her students because she is very kind to her students, works very hard and is very strict with herself in her work. Whenever her students e across any kind of difficulty, she is always ready to help them. As her daughter, I’m proud of my mother and hope to bee a teacher like her in the future.
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(答案→)My mother has been a music teacher in a primary school for nearly 20 years. She finished college at the age of 22 and chose to work as a teacher. She is well respected and deeply loved by her students because she is very kind to her students, works very hard and is very strict with herself in her work. Whenever her students e across any kind of difficulty, she is always ready to help them. As her daughter, I’m proud of my mother and hope to bee a teacher like her in the future.
解析：本文属于提纲类作文，要求根据所给提示介绍自己的母亲。所以使用第三人称，同时以现在时为主，在介绍过去所发生的事情的时候可以使用一般过去时。
要点：教龄近20年的小学音乐教师；二十二岁大学毕业选择当了老师； 工作努力，待学生态度和蔼，以身作则；深受学生尊敬爱戴；乐于帮助有困难的学生；我为母亲自豪。
写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】
本文中对于并列句的使用较好，如she is very kind to her students, works very hard and is very strict with herself in her work.；另外文章中也使用了高级的句式，如Whenever her students e across any kind of difficulty, she is always ready to help them.在以后的写作中考生一定要注意有关写作方法。