用英语写一篇150词左右的短文发表你的看法。
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.
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(答案→)Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.
解析：
此文为说明文：首先，审题：时态，因为是说明的现状及自己的观点，所以用一般现在时为主。第一段：说明许多商品存在过度包装的这个现象，来引出话题。第二段：对其原因进行分析，从厂家和消费者双方的角度说明原因。第三段：说明自己对此现象的看法。最后一段：自己的建议。针对其原因，提出有针对性的解决办法。
【亮点分析】
文章分为四段，分述现存的一种社会现象—过度包装、过度包装的原因、自己的看法和改变现状的建议。层次分明，结构清晰。文中用到了像：phenomena，to name but a few，stimulate ,thus, mistakenly, delicate, disastrous consequences, restrict, raise one’s awareness, equal, advocate ,in my point of view等高级词汇和短语，使得文章表达准确、地道、流畅。