请问这句话,语法有错么As time went on,the dreams of the past

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As time went on,their hopes began to wane.
随着时间的消逝,他们的希望开始变得渺茫
建议用一般过去时态
As time went on,the dreams of the past went away from me.
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供参考答案1:
have 改成had，过去完成时态
供参考答案2:
As time went on, the dreams of the past have(had) gone away from me.
供参考答案3:
as time goes by, my dreams in the past has gone away.
供参考答案4:
说 As time goes by, the dreams of the past have gone away from me. 更好。