This morning on my way school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man
was counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running
and knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In no
time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood here, not know
what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The old
man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,
there are now a lot of nice people in our life. It’s true that honesty is more important than
money!
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解析：
【小题1】Way后加to（on one’s way to去…的路上）
【小题2】deepdeeply（用副词修饰形容词）
【小题3】去掉the（in front of在…前面）
【小题4】while改成when（while后面的动词不能是短暂性动词）
【小题5】her改成him （上文提及old man是男性）
【小题6】all改every或 directions（该词是可数名词）
【小题7】rush改成rushed （本文描述过去的事情，用过去时）
【小题8】here改成there（指他站在那里）
【小题9】know改成knowing（分词做状语，与the old man构成主动关系，使用现在分词的形式）
【小题10】missed改成missing（形容词Missing不见了）