假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记, 记述你和父母一起为爷爷过生日的过程。注意:1周记的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于100。L

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假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记, 记述你和父母一起为爷爷过生日的过程。
注意:1.周记的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于100。

Last Saturday was my grandfather’s birthday.    
    Last Friday was my grandfather’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, we made many preparations. Early in the morning, my parents and I set off for the department store to find a gift for Grandpa. We chose very carefully, eventually a warm sweater caught our eye and was purchased. 

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(答案→)Last Friday was my grandfather’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, we made many preparations. Early in the morning, my parents and I set off for the department store to find a gift for Grandpa. We chose very carefully, eventually a warm sweater caught our eye and was purchased. 
解析:这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时:1. 认真读图,可知四幅图记述你和父母一起为爷爷过生日的过程。2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核,修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组和好的句子: set off for动身去,with the help of在…的帮助下, got together聚会,take a picture of 拍照,a feeling of acplishment and happiness.一种满足感和快乐感。With candles lit, we sang happy birthday out loud and clapped. 这句话用了with复合结构,After making a wish, he blew out the candles. 这句话用了省略句。
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