修改段落The purpose of this essay is to discuss a business should reduce advertising spending in times of recession. Advertising is a kind of promotion. It is giving some useful information to consumers, prompt interest and even tries to persuade customers to buy their products. Also promotion represents the various aspects of marketing munication, that is, the munication of information about the product with the goal of generating a positive customer response. (Marketing: marketing mix, 2002) Moreover, promotion is one significant ingredient of marketing mix. The other three marketing mix are product, price and place. A product is something that is offered to the market, therefore business need to understand what the product is and what it means to the consumer. (Andrew Gillespie, Barry Martin Malcolm Surridge, 2003: 66) Moreover, in a price-sensitive market, price plays a vital role in the marketing mix, such as petrol market. If one pany reduces its price the others follow rapidly. Finally, we should select a place which is associated with the channels of distributes, because through which we can get more target costumers.希望各位大大帮忙看下语法和巨型,谢谢了.满意追加... 英语
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The purpose of this essay is to discuss (the subject of reducing advertising spending in times of recession for a business).Advertising is a kind of promotion.It is giving some useful information to consumers,(prompts their) interest and even tries to persuade (them) to buy products.Also,promotion represents (the 去掉) various aspects of marketing munication,that is,(munication about the product information）with the goal of generating a positive customer response.(Marketing:marketing mix,2002)
Moreover,promotion is (one of the four significant ingredients) of marketing mix.The other three (去掉marketing mix） are product,price and place.A product is something that is offered to the market,therefore （businesses) need to understand what the product is and what it means to the consumer.(Andrew Gillespie,Barry Martin Malcolm Surridge,2003:66) (Then),in a price-sensitive market,(such as petrol market,price plays a vital role in the marketing mix.) If (a) pany reduces its price,the others (will) follow rapidly.Finally,we should select a place which is associated with the channels of (distribution),(去掉because）through which we can get more target costumers.