假设今天是三月五日,星期六,天气晴。你班级组织“学雷锋,做好事”活动。你和同学们7:30在学校门口集中,然后分头去清洁公园、养老院看望老人、医院看望生病的小孩。请据此写一篇80词左

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假设今天是三月五日,星期六,天气晴。你班级组织“学雷锋,做好事”活动。你和同学们7:30在学校门口集中,然后分头去清洁公园、养老院看望老人、医院看望生病的小孩。请据此写一篇80词左右的日记。注意日记的格式和时态,用上所给的提示词,可以适当发挥。

    
    
    
    
    
    
    
Saturday, March 5th     Sunny
It was fine today. My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7:30. We are divided into three groups. Some helped clean up the park. Some went to the old People’s home to visit the old people. They played chess with them and performed a play for them. I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates. We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up. I felt very happy because I could help others. 

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Saturday, March 5th     Sunny
It was fine today. My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7:30. We are divided into three groups. Some helped clean up the park. Some went to the old People’s home to visit the old people. They played chess with them and performed a play for them. I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates. We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up. I felt very happy because I could help others. 
解析:
这是一篇日记,时态应该是过去时,要点包括:你和同学们7:30在学校门口集中,然后分头去清洁公园、养老院看望老人、医院看望生病的小孩。有提示词,要充分利用,要用好简单句,适当用复杂句。Some helped clean up the park.这是help do词组,I felt very happy because I could help others.这是because引导的原因状语从句。
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