错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday afternoon Frank Hawkins was telling me about his experience as a young man. Before he retired,Frank was a head of a very large business pany,but as a boy he used to working in a small shop. It was his job to repair bicycles and at this time he used to work fourteen hours a day. He saved money for years but in 1958 he bought a small workshop of his own. In his twenties Frank used to make spare parts for aeroplanes. At that time he had two helpers. In few years the small workshop had bee a large factory which had employed seven hundred and twenty-eight people. Frank smiled when he remembered his hardly early years and the long road to success. He was still smiling when the door open and his wife came in. She wanted him to repair her grandson's bicycle！experiences
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(答案→)experiences
解析：
【小题1】experiences当经历讲是可数名词，所以experience改为experiences。
【小题2】表示特定的人，用定冠词the。
【小题3】used to do sth.是固定用法，意思是过去常常做某事。
【小题4】 表示在那个时候，所以this改为that。
【小题5】表示并列关系，所以but---and。
【小题6】in a few years是固定用法，意思是几年。
【小题7】这里含有一个定语从句，表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时。
【小题8】hard意思是努力地，hardly意思是几乎不，所以hardly改为hard。
【小题9】“门”和“打开”之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词。
【小题10】句意：她想让他修他们孙子的自行车。所以her改为their。