假设你所在小区的物业管理中心就目前存在的问题张贴告示,如下所述:告示亲爱的业主:目前,小区饲养宠物的人越来越多,宠物粪便随处可见,且难以清除。为防止含有有害细菌的粪便传播疾病,所以

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假设你所在小区的物业管理中心就目前存在的问题张贴告示,如下所述:
告示
亲爱的业主:
目前,小区饲养宠物的人越来越多,宠物粪便随处可见,且难以清除。为防止含有有害细菌的粪便传播疾病,所以就此提醒宠物应受到严格限制,且宠物主须牢记:1、须到相关部门办理宠物饲养许可证;2、须在宠物年满四个月后的30天内为其接种疫苗,并在一年内再次接种疫苗。
物业管理中心
2013年9月11日
【写作内容】
1、描述目前小区出现的问题;
2、物业管理中心的提醒;
3、宠物主须牢记的两点;
4、张贴此告示的目的。
【写作要求】
1、开头与结尾已给出;
2、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
提示词:vaccinate给…接种疫苗
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
    
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre
One possible version:
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
Since there are so many pets in our munity,we can see pet waste everywhere,which is so hard to remove.For this matter,we require pets should be strictly restricted and that the following details also kept in heart.Firstly ,you should license your pet at the relative authority.Secondly,you have to have your pet vaccinated within 30 days after it reaches four months of age and revaccinated within one year.To prevent pet waste containing harmful bacteria from spreading diseases,we have sensible reasons to do so.
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre 

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One possible version:
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
Since there are so many pets in our munity,we can see pet waste everywhere,which is so hard to remove.For this matter,we require pets should be strictly restricted and that the following details also kept in heart.Firstly ,you should license your pet at the relative authority.Secondly,you have to have your pet vaccinated within 30 days after it reaches four months of age and revaccinated within one year.To prevent pet waste containing harmful bacteria from spreading diseases,we have sensible reasons to do so.
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre 
解析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。正确使用复合句,比如定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如prevent…from, take good care of, try our best.还运用了since, which,if引导的状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:For this matter,Firstly, Secondly等等。
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