假如您是李华,在英语课上,英语老师让同学们用英语把自己介绍给全班同学。请根据下列要点,用英语描述自己。1. 外貌:个子高,略有点瘦;2. 优点:诚实友善,学习勤奋,乐于助人,与同学

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假如您是李华,在英语课上,英语老师让同学们用英语把自己介绍给全班同学。请根据下列要点,用英语描述自己。
1. 外貌:个子高,略有点瘦;
2. 优点:诚实友善,学习勤奋,乐于助人,与同学相处很好,深受同学们的喜爱;
3. 爱好和特长:喜欢流行音乐,爱好体育,擅长打篮球;会说一口流利的英语。
4. 决心向同学们学习。
注意:词数:100左右。可适当增加细节。Hello, class, it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone. I am XXX years old. I e from XXX City. I am a little fat, but honest and friendly. I study very hard and do well in all      subjects. I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. I am popular among the students. I have a great many hobbies, such as pop music and sports activities. I am good at playing basketball. What’s more, I will make up my mind to learn from everyone. 

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(答案→)Hello, class, it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone. I am XXX years old. I e from XXX City. I am a little fat, but honest and friendly. I study very hard and do well in all      subjects. I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. I am popular among the students. I have a great many hobbies, such as pop music and sports activities. I am good at playing basketball. What’s more, I will make up my mind to learn from everyone. 
解析:本文属于提纲类短文,要求用英语把自己介绍给全班同学,文章的要点都已经给出了。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文有一些常见的短语和词组:do well in在…方面做的好,get along with相处,be ready to准备好的,be popular among sb受…欢迎,.be good at doing擅长,. make up one’s mind to do决定做…。还有一些句式:it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone.这是it做形式主语的句子,I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. 这句话是并列句, What’s more,
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