文中共有l0处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The Great Wenchuan Earthquake was shocked we Chinese. Most people took out some of their money help the injured people. But our class were organized to collect money in the street at weekend. My team sent to a park. As soon as we get there, we began to work. We put up notices to tell people we were students from high school to collected money with the injured people in this Great Wenchuan Earthquake. When people saw us, they gave us their money generous. And soon we accepted a lot of money, we all felt the society is full of love. Though we were tired that day, we felt very happy.去掉was
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(答案→)去掉was
解析：文章讲述为了帮助汶川地震受伤的人，作者的班级被组织周末到街上募捐，人们都慷慨的捐款，使作者觉得世界上是充满了爱。
【小题1】汶川地震使中国人民很震惊。这里是主动语态：去掉was
【小题2】这里用宾格us在句中和Chinese是同位语，做句中的宾语
【小题3】人们拿出一些钱帮助受伤的人。To help是不定式做目的状语
【小题4】我们班被组织周末到街上募捐，两句话是并列关系也可以理解成因果关系，But 改成 And 或 So
【小题5】我们队被派到公园。是被动含义， Sent前面加was
【小题6】我们一到那里，就开始工作，用一般过去式：get改成got
【小题7】我们张贴布告告诉人们我们是学校的学生来为大地震的伤员筹集钱的。这里是不定式做目的状语：collected 改成collect
【小题8】介词for表示“为了”，
【小题9】人们慷慨的捐钱。generous 改成 generously，修饰gave us their money
【小题10】很快我们就收到很多钱。Accept是主观接受， received 是客观收到。