上月，我们公司以35岁以下的人群作为调查对象, 选取了1000人进行了关于“网上购物”的一项调查, 调查情况如下：
你是否愿意在网上购物？
结果
64%愿意
36%不愿意
原因
1.方便, 在家可买到所需物品
2.网上商品比较便宜, 而且可选择的品牌多
1.害怕买到赝品
2.担心被骗钱
结论
只要防范网上购物的弊端, 将有越来越多的人选择
网上购物。
[写作内容]
根据以上数据，写一篇调查报告, 内容包括：
1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;
2. 愿意网上购物的人占调查人数的百分比；
3.人们愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
4. 人们不愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
5. 本次调查的结论。Last month, our pany carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.
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(答案→)Last month, our pany carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.
解析：本篇写作题材是网上购物的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述，正方观点及依据和自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. 这句话有原因状语从句和让步状语从句，还有过去分词做定语，也有it做形式宾语， they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. 这句话用了with复合结构，The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. 这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语， only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line. 这句话用了倒装句，还有文章还使用Besides, In conclusion,这些词使文章更加连贯。