I spent most of my summer holidays travel in London. I arrived there in middle of July. After reaching my sister’s apartment I got many sleep. The next day I went to St Paul’s Cathedral, an amazing monument, that was well worth a visit. After take some photos in front of it, I moved on to the Tate Modern art gallery. There is an excellent exhibition of oil paintings and sculptures by some famous British artist. For dinner we went to the Ivy, a very beautifully restaurant. The food was good but the atmosphere was nice. It was a great day of sightseeing and one that would never be forgotten it.travel改为traveling
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(答案→)travel改为traveling
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【小题1】 travel改为traveling固定搭配spend some time doing sth花费时间做某事。
【小题2】many改为much 名词sleep是一个不可数名词，所以使用much修饰。
【小题3】.that改为which 关系代词that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
【小题4】take改为taking 介词after后面要接动名词形式。
【小题5】.is改为was 本文的基本时态是一般过去时，故使用was。
【小题6】artist改为artists 前面有some修饰，说明后面使用复数artists的形式。
【小题7】beautifully改为beautiful 修饰名词restaurant，使用形容词beautiful的形式。
【小题8】正确
【小题9】but改为and 上下文之间存在着并列关系，故使用and连接。
【小题10】去掉it 本句是一个被动语态，动词forget的逻辑宾语就是句子的主语。