Your essay is quite good: just it with a few illustrations and quotations.
A. put .. up
B. touch .. up
C. cut .. out
D. write .. off
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A. put .. up
(答案→)B. touch .. up
C. cut .. out
D. write .. off
解析： 本题译文：你的文章很好；只要用些例证和引语修饰一下。 touch up(=improve or perfect by small additional strokes or alterations)润色，修饰：1)The last part of the article needs to be touched up.(这篇文章的最后一部分需要润色。) 2)He touched up the picture by strengthening and shadows.(他把画修饰了一下，使光明部分和阴暗部分的对比度更鲜明。)
put up留宿；cut out 删掉；write off报销，勾消。