请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面:1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。2. 是否同意他们的教育方式, 并陈述理由。3. 对家庭教育提出建议。注意:1. 词数

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请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面:
1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。
2. 是否同意他们的教育方式, 并陈述理由。
3. 对家庭教育提出建议。

注意:1. 词数:150左右。 2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
3. 参考词汇:溺爱 spoil v.
As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways.     
    As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate. What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him. They adopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child confused. 

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(答案→)As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate. What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him. They adopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child confused. 
解析:这是一篇看图作文,谈论的是家庭教育的问题,写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
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