下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加,删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加,删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is my father’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, I went to a shop and choose a present for him. After that, I went home by the train. On the way, I was imagining how happily my father would be when he accepted the present. The train got to the next stop before I knew it. An old lady got the train. Every seat was taken, but she had to stand with two heavy bags in both of her hand.
After an immediate hesitation(犹豫), I gave my seat to her and he was grateful for all what I did.
In my opinion, give others a hand whenever they are in trouble not only brings happiness to the ones who receive it but also to the ones who give it. 

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解析:
【小题1】choose改成chose这篇文章是过去时。
【小题2】by train乘火车,去掉 the
【小题3】would be后面接形容词happy
【小题4】accepted是客观接受,received是主观接受,
【小题5】get on,是上车
【小题6】上下文是因果关系,but改成So
【小题7】both of 后面用hands
【小题8】she代指An old lady
【小题9】that引导定语从句修饰all。
【小题10】give改成giving,这是动名词做主语。
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