Some students believe that whether they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they wanted to do if they have money. Some students think that they should be good health, and enjoy whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they don’t have to work hardly and they can own everything. I don’t quite agree on the above points. I don’t think money means happy. We cannot buy much things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. I value knowledge, it makes me happy, for I can do a lot of for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, me wealth of happiness is in my study.whether改为if
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(答案→)whether改为if
解析：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。
【小题1】whether改为if 本句中的if表示的是条件，而whether是不能引导条件状语从句的。很多人任务如果他们有很多的钱，他们就会幸福。
【小题2】wanted改为want 本文的基本时态就是一般现在时，讲述的就是现在的情况。
【小题3】be后面接in 固定搭配in good health指身体健康。本句是指他们身体健康。
【小题4】hardly改为hard work hard努力工作；hardly是副词“几乎不…”；本句是指他们希望从父母那里得到很多的钱，自己就不需要努力工作了。
【小题5】on改为to/with 本句中的agree to/with…同意…的观点。Agree on….指在某一点上达成一致意见。
【小题6】happy改为happiness 动词mean后面要接名词或者动名词。本句中使用happiness作为mean的宾语。
【小题7】much改为many 后面的名词是可数名词复数形式things，故使用many修饰可数名词复数。Much只修饰不可数名词。
【小题8】it改为which 本句是非限制性定语从句，it是不能引导非限制性定语从句的。
【小题9】去掉of 本句中的a lot作为动词do的宾语，指我们可以做很多事情。A lot of后面要接名词作宾语。
【小题10】me改为my。宾格me后面不能接名词作宾语，只能使用形容词性物主代词做定语修饰名词。