请你根据以下提, Never be afraid of making mistakes. In fact, making progress is making mistakes.

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请你根据以下提, Never be afraid of making mistakes. In fact, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes are where success lies.并结合自己生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; 
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
4.词数为120左右。
注意:文章首句已给出。
Mistakes are unavoidable in life.    Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference. 

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(答案→)Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference. 
解析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子: make a difference有影响,有差别,. At the beginning一开始,
keep silent保持沉默, avoid making mistakes. 避免犯错,be afraid of害怕, He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. 这句话用了宾语从句,Whenever I make mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future.这句话用了让步状语从句, With time going by, I built up my confidence and now I can talk fluently in English, just as the saying goes, mistakes are where success lies. 这句话用了with复合结构, Practice makes perfect. 和mistakes are where success lies.这两句是谚语,用在这里很恰当。
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