有这样一则故事:在唐太宗贞观年间,在一个磨坊里,有一匹马和一头驴成了好朋友,马在外面拉货,驴在磨坊里拉磨。有一天,唐僧要到天竺取经,选中了这匹马,于是这匹马就随唐僧一起西游天竺,驮

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有这样一则故事:在唐太宗贞观年间,在一个磨坊里,有一匹马和一头驴成了好朋友,马在外面拉货,驴在磨坊里拉磨。有一天,唐僧要到天竺取经,选中了这匹马,于是这匹马就随唐僧一起西游天竺,驮回了真经,回来后,这匹马向惜日的好友――驴,讲述了一路上的美丽风景和奇文趣事,这头驴好生羡慕。这匹马说:事实上,我和你都在一刻不停地走着一样远的路,所不同是,我和师傅确定了远大的目标,并坚定地走下去,而你只是在磨坊里被矇住了眼睛。
请根据上面的文字提示,结合学校开展的“My Dream”主题班会,写一篇书面发言材料,词数100以上。My dream is to bee a teacher,and it will be not an easy thing to do. why doI want to be a teacher? first, being a teacher has been one of my dreams since my childhood. when I was a small boy,I saw our village education condition was limited because our village was so poor. it was often dropping from the roof when we had lessons.therefore.when I studied in the primary school, my dream had turned to plant in my heart.at that time, I swealed I would change my life because this dream has been hiding in my inner heart.so I do my efforts to make my dream e true.Despite of a lot of difficulty and hardship, i believe my dream will be realized. 

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(答案→)My dream is to bee a teacher,and it will be not an easy thing to do. why doI want to be a teacher? first, being a teacher has been one of my dreams since my childhood. when I was a small boy,I saw our village education condition was limited because our village was so poor. it was often dropping from the roof when we had lessons.therefore.when I studied in the primary school, my dream had turned to plant in my heart.at that time, I swealed I would change my life because this dream has been hiding in my inner heart.so I do my efforts to make my dream e true.Despite of a lot of difficulty and hardship, i believe my dream will be realized. 
解析:考查开放性作文。这篇开放性作文给出了一个故事,有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文中使用了一些词组:do my efforts to努力做…,e true.成为现实,turned to 变成,和一些语法知识:my dream is to bee a teacher,and it will be not an easy thing to do.这句话用了不定式做表语和定语, being a teacher has been one of my dreams since my childhood. 这句话用了动名词做主语, despite of a lot of difficulty and hardship, I believe my dream will be realized.这句话用despite表示转折,还有文章还使用了 first,这样的关联词,使文章更加连贯。
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