假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ )

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。                               文中10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一条横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;  2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.students改成student 

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(答案→)students改成student 
解析:文章介绍汤姆是个勤奋的学生,周末都不休息,但是因为太疲劳效果不好,爸爸建议他好好休息一下,全家人到郊区野餐,放风筝,玩得很愉快,星期一,汤姆也能精力充沛的上课。
【小题1】汤姆是个高二学生,因为是单数,所以students改成student
【小题2】在晚上,他在家学习到深夜。因为是上个星期六的事情,用一般过去时:studies改成studied
【小题3】他太困太累以至于不能有效的学习。这里用so…that句型:too改成so
【小题4】在星期天的早上用介词In
【小题5】他刚要学习这时爸爸过来建议他休息一下。词组:have a break休息一下
【小题6】他们买了一个非常喜欢的风筝。这句话用了定语从句,先行词是kite,定语从句省略的关系代词,所以定语从句中应该缺少宾语,去掉it
【小题7】他们到了郊区,在那里汤姆自己玩放风筝。Enjoy后面接动名词:fly改成flying
【小题8】全家人一起野餐,在户外感觉很放松。这两句话是并列关系:but改成and
【小题9】星期一的时候,汤姆在教室里面精力充沛很积极。和energetic并列做表语,应该是形容词: actively改成active
【小题10】他说这只是因为他度过了一个很好的周末。This is why“那就是为什么”,改成That is because“那就是因为”
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