假设今天是7月12日，星期六，天气晴朗，你和全班同学到南郊公园游玩。 请根据以下内容，以日记的形式记叙今天你的出游情况。
1. 上午乘车1小时到达目的地，爬山，唱歌 ， 做游戏。
2. 中午吃完饭午餐后组织一个小活动，向游客宣传环保的重要性
3. 下午4点返回
注意：1.词数 100 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯Today I went on a trap to Nanjiao Park with all my classmates .After an hour ‘s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to climb the hill . All the way up , we sang happily. On the top of the hill, we played some interesting games . All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.
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(答案→)Today I went on a trap to Nanjiao Park with all my classmates .After an hour ‘s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to climb the hill . All the way up , we sang happily. On the top of the hill, we played some interesting games . All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.
解析：本文是日记题材，学生很容易能把握写作要求与目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先注意作文时态，用一般过去时，并且用第一人称。再有注意不能逐句翻译，注意句子之间的衔接，句法流畅，逻辑关系严谨。
【亮点说明】 文中 用了很多非常好的短语 ，如as soon as ,not only ,but also,enjoy oneself 等。还运用了though引导状语从句，talking to 做伴随状语。使文章的结构更加紧凑，更有逻辑性。并且文章还运用高级词汇如 importance ,environment, return, 为文章增色不少，提高文章档次。