很快就要初中毕业了,中考完后每个人都有自己的计划或者愿望。下课时,有几位同学谈了自己的想法,有人想学习,有人想旅游,你又有什么想法呢?请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下吧:Jim以前很忙

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很快就要初中毕业了,中考完后每个人都有自己的计划或者愿望。下课时,有几位同学谈了自己的想法,有人想学习,有人想旅游,你又有什么想法呢?请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下吧:
Jim
以前很忙,没有时间玩,想去北京旅游放松一下,并且学习更多中国历史。
Amy
对电脑感兴趣,考完试后去学习电脑, 这样能在电脑上做很多事情。
You
……
提示词:used to    travel    learn more about…   after the exam    hope  
要求:1)所有提示词都应用上,语言运用准确得当,句子通顺,表达符合语言逻辑,可发挥适当想像,字数80左右。
2)不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称等个人相关信息。
    
    
    
    
    Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in puter, hopes to learn how to use the puter after the exam. Then she can do many things on puter. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. I’m sure I’ll be happy when I help them. ( 此部分为考生自主发挥部分) 

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(答案→)Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in puter, hopes to learn how to use the puter after the exam. Then she can do many things on puter. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. I’m sure I’ll be happy when I help them. ( 此部分为考生自主发挥部分) 
解析:这是一篇给材料作文,所给材料非常详细,分别介绍两个人的想法。写作中注意将两个人的想法表达清楚注意应用所给单词短语。在写作时要注意时态,人称和固定词组的搭配,要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时,注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
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