我们身边有很多的人对我们影响甚大，其中不乏有老师或朋友在你困难的时候帮助你，请结合你自己的一次经历谈谈你对朋友或老师在你人生道路上的重要性。写一篇100-120词左右的短文。Our teachers and friends are important for us. I had such an experience when I was in junior school. I was doing badly in maths at that time. However hard I tried, I just couldn’t catch up with others. I almost lost heart when we had a new maths teacher, Mr Hu, now and then he talked with me, telling me the ways to learn maths and encouraging me to keep on trying, Only then did I realize that I was not studying maths in a scientific way. With his help, I was doing a little better gradually. One year later, I made amazing progress.
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(答案→)Our teachers and friends are important for us. I had such an experience when I was in junior school. I was doing badly in maths at that time. However hard I tried, I just couldn’t catch up with others. I almost lost heart when we had a new maths teacher, Mr Hu, now and then he talked with me, telling me the ways to learn maths and encouraging me to keep on trying, Only then did I realize that I was not studying maths in a scientific way. With his help, I was doing a little better gradually. One year later, I made amazing progress.
解析：此作文题目是一篇材料作文，但作文的要求又比较灵活，有自由发挥的空间，可以谈老师对自己的帮助，也可谈同学对自己的帮助。同时也可以写老师同学对自己其它方面的影响，在人生的道路上对自己产生的重要影响。
【亮点说明】文章语言组织紧凑，句子富于变换，不落俗套。段落层次清晰，详略得当。同时语言的使用尤其是复杂句型结构的使用使文章更有气势，语言富有感染力。例如Only then did I realize that I was not studying maths in a scientific way.倒装句的使用。However hard I tried, I just couldn’t catch up with others使用让步状语也使语言更加丰富。
考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力