How many time do you spend with your parents? 1.
Your parents are your dearer people in the world 2.
when you are young. And they always care of you 3.
deep. But even though many children still love their 4.
mum and dad, families may bee more close 5.
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for 6.
families to get together. Have you ever thought of 7. ?
how you can show your parents that you love them? 8.
Find a chance and do something for them or to have 9.
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents 10.
will be very happy.1. 将many改为much。
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(答案→)1. 将many改为much。
解析：
1. 将many改为much。修饰不可数名词(time)不能用many。
2. 将dearer改为dearest。与in the world连用，用最高级。
3. 将of改为for。care for sb.= love sb.爱某人。
4. 将deep改为deeply。表示抽象意义“深深地”，用deeply。
5. 将more改为less。由even though和still可知，小孩随着年龄增大，与父母的关系可能变得不及以前亲密。
6. 将you改为they。因为是代替上文的many children。
7. 去掉of。think of后面常接sth.或doing sth.，不接从句。
8. 此行正确。
9. 去掉to。have与前面的find并列，均为祈使句。
10. 在sincere前加上a。have a talk with sb是固定词组。