假设你是李华，请根据以下表格为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，陈述你的观点。报纸的优点学生最喜爱栏目两点建议①了解很多信息，如音乐、文学、教育、体育、科技等。② 经常阅读该报，增长知

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(答案→)Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can get information about a lot of things such as music, literature, education, sports, science and technology. And all articles are written in excellent English. Therefore, by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. The students’ favourite column is Help because it can help them work out problems on their study or life. 
解析：考查提纲式作文：为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，这篇文章的提纲很详细，根据所给提纲，以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了一些短语：broaden their horizons,开阔视野， encourage … to鼓励某人做…work out 算出，解决，还有句式也富有变化：And all articles are written in excellent English. by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. 这句话用了not only..but also…结构， it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment.这句话用了不定式做目的状语和宾语， it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading petitions.这句话用了it做形式主语，还有文章还使用了Therefore,First, Second,这样的词使文章更加连贯。