假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make some improvement.
Yours faithfully,
Li Huawell改为 good 

网友回答

(答案→)well改为 good 
解析:【小题1】well改为 good ,good为形容词,well为副词,形容词修饰名词
【小题2】problem改为problems,前文中有some修饰可数名词的复数形式
【小题3】much改为 many,advertisements为可数名词的复数形式用
many修饰即可
【小题4】annoyed改为annoying,It指代广告, annoying令人恼怒的,一般物作为主语,annoyed感到恼怒的,一般人作为主语
【小题5】too改为so ,句意:声音是如此的大以至于我根本忍受不了,so …that 如此以至于,固定句型
【小题6】bear∧it,bear容忍,为及物动词后接宾语,故加it
【小题7】signs改为sign,句意:出口的标记不能够被清晰的看见。
【小题8】terribly 改为terrible,用形容词修饰不定代词
【小题9】will 改为would,整个文章讲述了是过去的事情,故用过去将来时
【小题10】a改为the,特指这封信
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