短文写作(共一题,满分25分)假设你叫李明,下面是你的一位外国笔友Kristie给你写的电子邮件,询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。Dear Li Ming, I learned from

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短文写作(共一题,满分25分)
假设你叫李明,下面是你的一位外国笔友Kristie给你写的电子邮件,询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。
Dear Li Ming,
I learned from a news flash that a two-year-old baby girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town.I’m very shocked.I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago.So I doubt whether it was true news.Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?
Sincerely yours,
Kristie
请你给她回一封邮件,要点如下:
1.社会陷入自责和反思;
2.某些路人的冷漠或另有原因,可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出;
3.单个事件不能代表中国,助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。
注意:
1.不能照抄原信件语句;
2.可自由发挥添加细节;
3.词数120左右;
4.回信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:伦理道德- ethical and moral (adj.); 美德- virtue (n.)
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits     
    
    
Believe me, Kristie, and believe in the Chinese people!
Sincerely yours,
Li MingDear Kristie, 

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(答案→)Dear Kristie, 
解析:本文是一篇给材料作文,或者说半开放作文,写一封回信,你就有关小悦悦事件,向外国笔友Kristie写一份电子邮件,要点已经给出社会陷入自责和反思2.某些路人的冷漠或另有原因,可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出; 3.单个事件不能代表中国,助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。在行文中,我们可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构,使文章结构严谨,增色不少。
【写作亮点】:句子:While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes和on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior.
。同时文章中使用了适当的关连词,比如    However,Luckily,So,等,使用文章结构严谨,浑然一体。
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