雅思牛人们帮忙改改口语part 2话题吧Describe your favorite room or apartment.-where it is-how long you have lived there-what rooms and furniture it has-why you like itMy favorite room is my den in my parents’ flat.I
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1别用den 不地道.用my bedroom或者my private room.
2第二段第二行去掉though.even at midnight
3第二段第二行 and 换成because
4第三段第三行连词用的不恰当.so even though 去掉.
5第三段第三行and just 改成but it has……
6第三段第一行 ought to stress 改成 have to say.
7is the most important reason why I love it.--------That7is the most important reason why I love it
8pressure----stressful
9 I like think ----I like imagining
10第三段后半段 考官未必能明白哦 太中国思维了