下图是刊载于某报纸的一幅幔画。请描述幔画所反映的问题,分析产生这些现象的成因并提出解决这个问题的对策。(注意:图中人物前的英语说明:左1:Primary School Studen

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下图是刊载于某报纸的一幅幔画。请描述幔画所反映的问题,分析产生这些现象的成因并提出解决这个问题的对策。
(注意:图中人物前的英语说明:左1:Primary School Student 中:Middle School Student右1:College Student)

注意:
1.分析产生这些现象的成因和对策需自己想象。
2.词数:120 左右。
3.参考词汇:昏暗的-dim
4.文章的第一句话已为你写好。
When Xiao Ming was a primary school student, he had to     
    
    
    
    
    When Xiao Ming was a primary school student, he had to wear glasses. Now he is a college student. As time goes on, he is being more and more near-sighted. The more he reads, the thicker his glasses are. As far as I know, more and more students have poor eyesight in China. 

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(答案→)When Xiao Ming was a primary school student, he had to wear glasses. Now he is a college student. As time goes on, he is being more and more near-sighted. The more he reads, the thicker his glasses are. As far as I know, more and more students have poor eyesight in China. 
解析:本题是比较常见的漫画类作文,漫画清晰明了,一目了然,学生不难下笔。注意,要按照要求作答,分析现象的原因,并提出解决的策略。字数方面,不要超过120个字。作文时,适当发挥想象,书写要有条理,可以使用一些比较好的短语和句子,增加亮点。注意上下文的连贯。
【亮点说明】范文层次分明,共分为三段,第一段介绍现象,第二段分析原因,第三段提出解决策略。范文使用了时间状语When;Now;As time goes on等表先后关系,使段落衔接紧密。还使用了一些短语As far as I know;As a result等,还使用了从句where the light is too dim,说明语法知识很牢固。
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