假如你是新华中学的高三学生李华,你校校报最近为高三学生创立了名为 “Sharing” 的专栏(column)。请你写一篇文章对其进行介绍,并谈谈自己的看法。内容要点包括:开设目的:

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假如你是新华中学的高三学生李华,你校校报最近为高三学生创立了名为 “Sharing” 的专栏(column)。请你写一篇文章对其进行介绍,并谈谈自己的看法。
内容要点包括:
开设目的:缓解压力,确保健康
专栏内容:高三学生的问题、困扰及焦虑;有针对性的指导及建议
专栏优势:专业的心理指导
你的感想
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Our school has set up a column called Sharing for Senior 3 students.     
    Our school has recently set up a column called Sharing for Senior 3 students. The column, aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, mainly deals with our worries in life and the challenges we meet in the course of study. It has a unique advantage that we can seek from experts in psychology some professional advice on our respective problems. 

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(答案→)Our school has recently set up a column called Sharing for Senior 3 students. The column, aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, mainly deals with our worries in life and the challenges we meet in the course of study. It has a unique advantage that we can seek from experts in psychology some professional advice on our respective problems. 
解析::考查提纲式作文:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】The column, aimed at relieving pressure and ensuring the health of us students, mainly deals with our worries in life and the challenges we meet in the course of study. 这句话用了过去分词做定语,It has a unique advantage that we can seek from experts in psychology some professional advice on our respective problems. 这句话用了定语从句, In my opinion, our school attaches great importance to our study and our mental health as well. 这句话里面用了attaches great importance to这个词组, Starting this column provides us with a platform on which to municate with others and pour out our feelings. 这句话用了动名词做主语和定语从句, we can turn to it for help when at a loss what to do. 这句话用了不定式,还有范文还使用了 On the other hand,怎样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
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