上周末你带了个外国朋友游览了鼋头渚(the Turtle Head Park)。请根据要点写一篇短文。
1、鼋头渚是无锡最著名的名胜之一，每天吸引大量游客来赏景；
2、几年前，那里环境差，交通拥挤。有些游客不注意保护环境；
3、如今已经发生了巨大的变化......
4、将全身心投入学习，将来把无锡建成最适合人居的地方。
注意： 1、第3要点的内容须用2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2、词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last weekend, I showed a foreign friend around the Turtle Head Park.
Last weekend, I showed a foreign friend around Turtle Head Park. It is one of the most famous places of interest in Wuxi. It attracts a lot of tourists here to enjoy its beauty every day. A few years ago, the environment there was bad and there was much traffic. Some tourists paid no attention to protecting environment. Now great changes have taken place. Tourists don’t pick the flowers any more. They don’t walk on the grass. I will put all my effort into my study and make Wuxi the most suitable place to live (in).
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(答案→)Last weekend, I showed a foreign friend around Turtle Head Park. It is one of the most famous places of interest in Wuxi. It attracts a lot of tourists here to enjoy its beauty every day. A few years ago, the environment there was bad and there was much traffic. Some tourists paid no attention to protecting environment. Now great changes have taken place. Tourists don’t pick the flowers any more. They don’t walk on the grass. I will put all my effort into my study and make Wuxi the most suitable place to live (in).
解析：本文是一篇介绍鼋头渚的文章，要点基本上已经给出，考生在写作的过程中只需要将要点写全，加上适当的连接词，让文章成为一个整体。同时注意使用一些高级的词汇如show… around, paid no attention to, put all my effort into my study等等。也要注意使用一些高级的句型，如make Wuxi the most suitable place to live (in).
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