假如你是李华, 收到笔友Mary的来信如下, 请你针对信中Mary遇到的问题进行回复, 给她提出建议。Dear Li Hua , How are you ? I am havin

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假如你是李华, 收到笔友Mary的来信如下, 请你针对信中Mary遇到的问题进行回复, 给她提出建议。
Dear Li Hua ,
How are you ?
I am having trouble with my desk mate Jenny at the moment . Last week , we had a maths test .The test was important and everyone had prepared for it except Jenny .
During the test , she asked me to help her. I refused and didn’t let her copy from my paper .As a result , she failed the test .She is angry with me and hasn’t talked to me since then . Now I don’t know how to deal with this problem .Can you give me some advice ?
I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours
Mary
写作要点:
给Jenny 写信,告诉她诚实的重要性及作弊的坏处。
帮助她学习数学,使她对学习数学充满信心。
如果她的英语比你的好,可以让她帮助你学英语,因为互帮互助可以加深(deepen )友谊。
词数要求:100左右(开头已给出, 不计入总词数)
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend.
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
Best wishes . 
Yours
LiHua Dear Mary 

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(答案→)Dear Mary 
解析:本题为材料作文,根据高考的评分要求,从两个方面分析题目。一是内容,主要有以下几个方面:①诚实的重要性。②作弊的坏处。③帮助他学习数学,树立学习数学的信心。④如果他的英语好,让她帮学英语,增强友谊等几个方面。二是语言方面。要有精华的句子,起到画龙点晴的作用。例如,固定结构,倒装,强调等。
【亮点说明】本篇文章条理性很强,这是其有点之一。第二,文章中使用了较复杂的句子,例如you can try to help her with her maths so that she can make progress and believe in herself.使用了结果状语从句。
考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力
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