问下这句话的语法或时态有错吗?错的话帮我改下i...am actually coward.when i watch horror movies,i do not have the courage to open my eyes.if i go to a high place,my legs will shake.but...the most scary thingis when i can not
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亲,你的这些句子没有什么大的语法错误,只是翻译的时候汉语的痕迹比较明显,说得明白一点,就是不够地道.个人觉得可以这样改：To tell the truth, I'm a little timid sometimes. When I wathch thrillers, I even don't dare to open my eyes fully. And if I go to somewhere high,my legs struggle as well .Furthermore, what I'm afraid most is that you're out of my sight.
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其实不用改的吧！如果要改的话，同时watch要改为watched，用来表示过去的事实，但建议不要改，这不是过去式，而该用一般现在时，而且if那个句子是主将从现嘛！就这样~