短文改错(满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误,增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
I'm glad to remend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was
born in July 15, 1974, in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and
chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he
entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four year of hard work
there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his
excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is
now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country.I
will be most gratefully if you consider my remendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply
Yours truly,
Wang Linin改为on
网友回答
(答案→)in改为on
解析:
【小题1】in改为on 具体到某一天使用介词on。
【小题2】good改为well 固定搭配do well in…在某方面表现良好。
【小题3】and后面加was and表示并列结构,be fond of…喜欢;本句使用一般过去时的时态。
【小题4】去掉into 动词enter是一个及物动词,后面直接加宾语,不需要介词。
【小题5】year改为years 前面有four修饰,说明这里使用复数形式。
【小题6】get改为got 本句叙述的是已经发生的事情,故使用一般过去时的形式。
【小题7】去掉in this year在句中单独做时间状语,不需要属于in this year。
【小题8】but改为and 上下文是并列的关系,故使用and连接。
【小题9】gratefully改为grateful 本句中的形容词grateful与be连用,形成系表结构。
【小题10】receive改为receiving 本句的to是介词,后面要接动名词的形式。