常言道: “一个成功孩子的背后是一个伟大的母亲” (Behind each successful child is a great mother)。请结合自身经历, 简述你母亲在生

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(答案→)As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. Nobody can achieve success without parental love and Mother’s devotion plays an especially critical role in our life. Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements. 
解析：这是一篇开放性作文，给出了一个话题，“一个成功孩子的背后是一个伟大的母亲”，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. 这句话是非限制性定语从句， Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.这句话用了定语从句， Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. 这句话用了让步状语从句和原因状语从句， Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. 这句话也是让步状语从句和词组：spares no efforts to do，It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.这句话用了it做形式主语，.And what we can do is never to stop halfway. 这句话里面有主语从句，Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.这句话用了倒装句，还有文章用了 On the other hand,这样的词使文章更加连贯。