2013年高考在即,高三学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中。假如你叫李华,承德市某高中的高三学生,寒假之际,想和父母说说知心话,请你用英文在你的博客上给你父母写一封信。具体内容如下

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2013年高考在即,高三学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中。假如你叫李华,承德市某高中的高三学生,寒假之际,想和父母说说知心话,请你用英文在你的博客上给你父母写一封信。具体内容如下:
知心话
 
感 恩
关切鼓励,倾注爱心
对父母的期望
1. 多加交流,使自己保持良好状态
 
2. 创造条件,给自己提供适时帮助
寒假打算
考生自拟(至少写出三点)
注意:1. 写作时注意格式;2. 词数不少于120;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 高考 college entrance examination
Dear Mom and Dad,
Traditional Chinese Spring Festival is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart­to­heart talk with you.
    
    
Yours sincerely,
Li HuaDear Mom and Dad, 

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(答案→)Dear Mom and Dad, 
解析:考查提纲式作文:这是一篇高三学生写给父母的知心话,写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】范文要点全面,句式多变: Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making tremendous progress in my studies.这句话用了thanks to多亏了, It will be less than five months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me under great pressure and need frequent support. 这句话用了固定句型It will be +一段时间+before….,和非限制性定语从句, Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. 这句话里面都省略关系代词的定语从句,I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this ing winter vacation so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. 这句话用了so…that…句型,It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. 这句话用了it做形式主语,If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.这句话用了省略句, I am quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy new year.这句话用了强调。
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