Last February,I was on holiday in Beijing with my family.One morning,I was sleepingsoundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister,It's snowing. I got up quickly,dressed me and opened the window.Wow,I couldn't believe in my eyes.Everything includingtrees,roofs and grass were covered with thick snow.In distance I could see lots of cars,like smallwhite box,moving slowly on the road.I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in thesnow.How a beautiful sight!I became exciting because I had never seen snow before.In no time,I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow.改错,救命,在考试 英语
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【答案】 Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family.One morning, I was sleeping
soundly 【while--when 】I was woken up by a 【suddenly--sudden】 cry of my sister, It's snowing. I got up quickly,
dressed 【me--myself】 and opened the window.Wow, I couldn't believe 【去除in】 my eyes.Everything including
trees, roofs and grass【 were---was】 covered with thick snow.In【加the】 distance I could see lots of cars, like small
white 【box---boxes】, moving slowly on the road.I could also see some lovely birds flying happily in the
snow.【How--What】 a beautiful sight! I became 【exciting--excited】 because I had never seen snow before. In no time,
I ran out with my camera and 【take---took】 many photos to record my first experience of snow.