请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。标题为:My Teacher Mr MooreThere’s a teacher Mr .Moore.Who is lovely

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请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。
标题为:My Teacher Mr Moore
There’s a teacher Mr .Moore.
Who is lovely and thirty-four.
Always encouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of “why”.
We all admire him more and more.
注意:
1.不得照抄短诗原文。
2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开。
3.必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语意连贯。
4.短文不能写成诗歌形式。
5.词数:120左右。Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school. 

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(答案→)Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school. 
解析:这是一篇半开放式的作文,考生在写作时要注意短诗的重心,切忌偏题,诗主要是对这个老师进行了描述,考生要紧紧抓住这些特点,适当展开自己的想象,结合生活学习中老师的特点。在写作的过程中注意句型的多样化和连接词的使用。要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点,要求观点明确,驾驭语言的能力强,选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型,让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来,使文章成为一个整体。
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