This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.
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【小题1】bread“面包”是不可数名词,不能用breads
【小题2】这里用packed做谓语，packing是非谓语
【小题3】with∧the，特指“我手里的包”
【小题4】that改成who，这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that连接
【小题5】去掉with，greet是及物动词，问候彼此：greet each other
【小题6】和greeted并列用began
【小题7】指代Miss Wang的狗，用her dog
【小题8】因为面包发出香味，所以她的狗朝我的包走过来：though改成because/since/as/for
【小题9】面包掉在地上，狗开始吃，是并列关系：or改成and
【小题10】late是形容词：“迟的”， Five minutes later, 5分钟后