假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。Last weekend we

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily. Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not
prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high
going                                extremely
spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the
each                                         houses
sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the
mixed                               the
mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there. After having a short rest
What
and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We
 
are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.
were            but   

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(答案→)Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not
prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high
going                                extremely
spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the
each                                         houses
sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the
mixed                               the
mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there. After having a short rest
What
and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We
 
are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.
were            but   
解析:
【小题1】go-going 固定结构prevent sb (from) doing sth;
【小题2】extreme-extremely 用副词修饰后面的narrow。
【小题3】every-each, 道路主要两边,所以这里使用both或者each,因为后面是单数side,使用用each.
【小题4】house-houses.根据前面的some,可知这里应该用复数。
【小题5】mixing-mixed。固定词组be mixed with.
【小题6】the 特指在某一天的中午。
【小题7】that-what.主语从句中缺主语,what可以在主语从句里做主语。That只能引导起主语从句,不能充当任何成分。
【小题8】with   share是及物动词,不需要介词。
【小题9】were 文章讲述的是过去的事情。
【小题10】but 根据上下文可知前面说我们浑身湿透,后面说我们开心的唱歌大笑,说明是转折关系。
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