我校一年一度的秋季运动会即将来临，现请以“Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports 为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1． 体育运动的好处；
2． 过度的体育运动可能带来的副作用；
3． 作为一名运员你对体育运动的看法
注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2.可以适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.可能用到的词：过度的体育运动excessive sports
副作用side effective
Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the petitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work.
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(答案→)Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the petitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work.
解析：这是阐述优缺点的议论文，话题是运动的好坏的问题。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；优点和缺点以及自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】范文要点全面，有运动的优点也有缺点，还有自己的观点，句式多变：While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the petitive spirit.这句话用了省略句， as the saying goes, there are two sides to everything, and sports is without exception. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities.这句话里面既有条件状语从句也有时间状语从句的省略， It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people.这句话用了it做形式主语， So long as we are careful enough, sports can do us nothing but good. 这句话里面用so long as引导条件状语从句，还有文章还用了However, What's more,这样的词使文章更加连贯。